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September 7th, 2010, 11:32 am

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Author's Comments:

BaldDumboRat,

Bah, I couldn't help but make a new page after all the responses. XD
So from the information gathered, I'm sure most of you can tell where she's starting out from.
And also, thanks to earlier comments, I purposefully continued to have her mom covering her chest until the very last frame. Buahaha

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User's Comments:

Wikket-krikket,

Hee hee, her mom's hair reminds me of Maya from Phoenix Wright, somehow. XD

That aside, I just found this on the 'just updated' page and I was impressed with the art, so I read it- and I'm glad I did :D The prologue especially made me laugh! Love the rival's name XD

Looking forward to an update!

EZWheels,

YUSH I CAN STILL SEE BOOBIES!

godmoderncommander,

But they are covered up. T_T

jeffreyex,

BOOBIES!!! :3
wait covered up..... T-T Nuhh!

Plazmaz,

wow she's only ten...

BaldDumboRat,

Nope, she's 17. This pokemon world has a few exceptions to the rules.
I'll explain now since it'll be a while. Trainers can choose to go out at 10 on their adventure, but they have a set amount of time before they have to return home and attend schooling. Most kids are excited to leave at the age of ten, but they have a choice to continue schooling and adventure later. This particular trainer valued an education instead, and took her schooling so she could be more knowledgeable on her pokemon adventure.

Shiny pokemons!!,

Awesome. But whatever. I'd go out at 15, cause then you have some driving skillzz. Also, it's funner that way. When you have a few friends that want to travel with you. Obviously she's gonna travel with the first guy. Who "whited out". I forgot his name, sorry.

BaldDumboRat,

That loser's name is Jacob :D

Plazmaz,

@BDR
Okay makes sense

James Birdsong (Guest),

Majorly cool.

DarkTheSneasel,

poor oak it would be sad it she went there and he had one anyone.

i love the series so far keep up the great work.owo

Shinchan56798,

Ok let me get this straight... So the mom is sad because you are her only child and the father leaves her for a 20 year old evry 10 years and professer oak loves children and is a pedaphile?! Thats awesome XD

troblsomtwins829,

I never quite understood that statement, you won't FORGET, or you won't CALL??

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